In my revisions, I focused on making my writing more explicit. Both my argument and diction were unclear. I reworked my paragraphs to reiterate my claim, and I clarified my use of the word “responsibility.”
In my revisions, I focused on making my writing more explicit. Both my argument and diction were unclear. I reworked my paragraphs to reiterate my claim, and I clarified my use of the word “responsibility.”
